In September of 2004,
Dove launched a groundbreaking crusade for women called The Dove Campaign for
Real Beauty. This movement was initiated in response to the unreasonable
pressure that women face every day to meet the impossible standards of beauty represented
by media, entertainment, and fashion. Their goal was to embolden women to
“celebrate real beauty”, and to help them believe that they are beautiful just
the way they are. To prove the prevalence of this insecurity epidemic among
females, Dove posted a video on You Tube called Dove: Friends that publicized interviews with random women
on the street. Each of the women was asked to state one thing that she loved
about her body, but none of them were able to give a definitive answer. They
were then asked what they loved about their girlfriend’s body (who happened to
be standing next to them), and were suddenly full of compliments. The women’s
demeanor changed dramatically between the first question and the next; they
went from being a shy, nervous little girl to a confident, enthusiastic
‘infomercial model’ who was trying to sell her product (which, in this case,
was her friend). Dove concluded the video by asking viewers how they can see
the beauty in someone else when they are unable to see the beauty in
themselves. The ad connected with the women emotionally, but failed to
incorporate effective logos and ethos appeals.
At
first glance, all the money and hard work that Dove has poured into the
campaign for true beauty is admirable. They make no mention in the ad of how
their products will help women achieve ‘real beauty’, so this campaign appears
to be a selfless commitment to the welfare of the female population- at least
to the naked eye. It is no coincidence that the campaign was born at a time
when Dove was experiencing a decline in sales due to heavy competition in the
beauty industry.
Dove executives realized that they needed to do something completely different
in order to stand out, and their unconventional campaign gave them all the
press they needed. The commercial used ethos by conducting seemingly candid
interviews with real women on the street, which made them appear credible. But
was this depiction of the female population’s painful self-consciousness
accurate? Do women really have higher standards of beauty for themselves than
they have for their friends? Women generally try to avoid the appearance of
being stuck up and vain, so is it possible that they were being overly humble
in the ad? If their friend hadn’t been standing right there, perhaps they
wouldn’t have been so flattering in their response to the second question.
Maybe they simply gave the appropriate answer, regardless of whether or not it
reflected what they really felt. It was interesting to note how one of the
ladies described her friend as having ‘the most amazing physique and body”,
while tracing an imaginary hourglass shape with her hand. The friend was obviously
not ‘hourglass shaped’, so I can only wonder if the picture in the ‘artist’s’
head of an amazing physique was somewhat different than the body she was
actually describing. This is not to say that her friend was at all lacking in
beauty, but the example illustrates the harsh reality that women likely hold
others up to the same standards of beauty that they hold for themselves, they
just might not verbalize them. All in all, Dove’s basis for their theory in
this video seems to be staged and doesn’t depict an objective portrayal of
women. The campaign also pushed ethos by using the highly recognizable and
respected name of Dove, which aids in the appearance of credibility.
This
‘feel good’ ad was completely devoid of logos; Dove never explains exactly how
they will help women achieve the goal of real beauty. They made some broad
assumptions about women, which I believe should be challenged with some
questions. The campaign hopes to change the world’s idea of beauty, but are
women really that easy to convince? Also, women may appreciate the
all-inclusive approach to beauty that Dove is offering, but is this campaign
ignoring the masses of women who still want a product that makes her more
beautiful? If the Dove: Friends ad is not making an appeal to the logic of
women, what it attracting people to their product?
Apparently,
pathos is all the Dove ad really needed to grab the attention of their target
audience; this can be verified by their upward spike in sales following the launch
of the highly emotional campaign. In the article The Real Story Behind the Success of Dove's Campaign for Real Beauty, Marti Barletta notes that “the US
sales for the products featured in the ads increased 600 percent in the first
two months of the campaign. The Campaign for Real Beauty has exceeded company
expectations; global sales surpassed the $1 billion mark in 2004”.
So how did the campaign use pathos as their approach, particularly in the Dove:
Friends ad? Well, women tend to base their decisions off of emotions, and not
necessarily their logical thought processes. Also, most women desire to be
beautiful, but are constantly fighting with feelings of insecurity and
imperfection. When women don’t feel beautiful their emotions are negatively
affected, which in turn impacts the decisions they make. The Dove: Friends ad
effectively taps into this common psyche by identifying with women and their
struggles, and providing an inferred solution that supposedly fixes their
feelings of inadequacy. This is accomplished without articulating one practical
way in which their product will help.
My
critical conclusion to the ad is that Dove did not successfully appeal to logos
and ethos. It did, however, effectively target the emotions of women. The point
of the Dove Campaign remains a little ambiguous, but it seems that women are spending
their money on an idea, not a product.
Your blog was awesome. I think its amazing how two people can see through completely different points of view. I agree that the Dove Campaign for Real Beauty connects with women on an emotional level, as women and insecurities have always been an issue. The campaign also reaches out to the viewers to help in battling these insecurities by providing positive affirmations at a younger age. Maybe if that was done across the board (through out the world) future generations might not have the same insecurities as they do today. Great point with the comment about women not wanting to appear stuck up and vain, as a possibility for why women hesitate to compliment themselves. The exact thought had also occured to me. Again, a way women, young and older) are taught to be. I understand bottom line is about the money, however to me in the end.....if these commercials can touch just a handful of women/girls it is a success.
ReplyDeleteYour blog had many strong points supporting a clear thesis. I agree that Dove uses emotions to make people want to buy their product and support the "feel-good" message they are putting out there. I didn't even think about how women wouldn't want to feel conceded in telling what they love most about themselves. That is a good point and takes away from the credibility of this ad. Though I think you had many good points, I think it would have been helpful to include more about the ad's visual techniques and angle of vision. You did a good job touching on all of the appeals, but it could maybe be a little more organized. Also, I think you could relate your article a little better rather than just throwing out statistics used in it. As a whole though, I think your analysis was really good and you have a good understanding of the different appeals and how they are used as a rhetorical strategy.
ReplyDeleteRachel,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your analysis of the Dove Campaign. The layout, I thought, was good; you seem to really understand the material. I found it interesting that you mentioned how one particular individual described her friend as having a great physique. The way you questioned what was going through her mind and how suggested that perhaps the conversation may have gone differently providing the women’s friends had not been standing there was great analysis.
I also found that the supplementary article that you attached was quite interesting. You brought in some interesting contrast in motive on dove’s part. The way that you referred to how the ad used pathos, primarily, playing on women’s emotions to sell a product was well thought out. Great job overall!